ERROR CORRECTION 1

1. When ı first heard that ı had been accepted to Middle East Technical Unıversity, ı was disappointed. Because ı did not like Ankara as a city. But my opinions have changed over time dramatically. Because Middle East Technical Unıversity is really a different world in Ankara. (Underlined ı which is pronoun must be capital and 'ı' which is in the word 'university' must be 'i'. Moreover,  'Because and but ' as conjuctions require two sentences,so the sentences which include them are run-on.And also, in the last sentence, 'really' and 'a' words must be replaced.) 
         "When I first heard that I had been accepted to Middle East Technical University, I was disappointed because Idid not like Ankara as a city. However, my opinions have changed over time dramatically because Middle East Technical University is a really different world in Ankara."  
         2. It has been only one month since I came here. But I got used to this environment. Because, first of all, people from all of ages in here respect to each other. ( There are again run-on sentences  and 'of' in the last sentence is unnecessary. 'in here' must be at the end because it is more convenient in my opinion.) 
        "It has been only one month since I came here but I got used to this environment because, fist of all, people from all ages respect to each other in here. 
3. I love Ankara,I love my dormitory,I love my new friends, I love my department,I am content with everything which are belongs to METU.( There are lots of 'I' and 'love' and sentences are not connected each other and also 'are' and 'belong' can not be used together like this, so 'are' must be omitted)
        "I love Ankara, my dormitory, my new friends and my depertmant. That is, I am content with everything which belongs to METU."
 4. If someone wants to walk , he or she can go and walk. And it is nice place to go and meet with my friends.(There must be 'a' before 'nice' and using 'moreover' is more convenient instead of 'and'.
        "If someone wants to walk , he or she can go and walk. Moreover it is a nice place to go and meet with my friends."
5. We can easily see this by watching TV,surfing on the internet or maybe just looking around us.Because there are many people getting graduated from different kinds of universities but they're not even able to know what's going on around them or they don't even try to find good ways to improve the countries yhat they live in.( There is a run-on sentence, and 'get' and 'graduate' are not used together like this)
         "We can easily see this by watching TV. surfing on the internet or maybe just looking around us because there are many people graduating from different kinds of universities but they're not even able to know what's going on around them or they don't even try to find good ways to improve the countries that they live in.