7 Kasım 2012 Çarşamba

ERROR CORRECTION 2


Because I come from Aydın and I am not used to this type of weather. But never mind I will get used to. I feel great especially psychological aspect. Because I’m at where I want to be. Today,there are lots of universities all around the world in my opinion,most of them aren't able to educate their students enough to find good solutions to the problems that they face. ( There are run-on sentences. Moreover,'at' and 'where' can not be used together and there must be an adverb before enough.In addition, psychologically must be used  instead of psychological aspect, and 'in my opinion' must be at the end of the sentence.)
 " I come from Aydın. Therefore, I am not used to this type of weather but I don't mind because I will get used to. I feel great especially psychologically because I'm where I want to be. Today, there are lots of universities all around the world, most of which aren't able to educate their students well enough to find good solutions to the problems that they face in my opinion." 





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